Line Notes are the second type of feedback I offer and generally follow on from a Developmental Assessment, (once you’ve made any changes you want to make.) Line Notes focus on sentence structure, paragraph flow and ordering, repetition, consistency, point of view, tenses, info dumps, grammar and punctuation, whilst also flagging any hiccups in the plotting. This time, I offer my suggestions through Track Changes on your Word document that I then email to you, so you can decide which suggestions to accept or reject. (No need to worry if you’ve not used Track Changes before. It’s super easy and is included in Word.)

Many people I’ve worked with have become published and won competitions. So email me a rough project outline to receive helpful suggestions for your creative journey, or if you’d prefer to chat, email your phone number and I will call you right back: whatgailwrote@gmail.com