Line Notes are the second type of feedback I offer and generally follow on from a developmental assessment, once you’ve made any changes you want to make. Here, I focus on sentence structure, paragraph flow and ordering, repetition, consistency, point of view, tenses, fluidity, info dumps, grammar and punctuation, whilst also flagging issues with or errors in the plotting. This time, I offer my suggestions through Track Changes on your Word document that I then email to you, so you can decide which suggestions to accept and which to reject. (No need to worry if you’ve not used Track Changes before. It’s really easy and convenient and is included in Word.)